Individualised Grade 11 and 12 Support
Grades 11 and 12 are two enormous years in any student’s life and can
bring all sorts of stress to the whole family. I can’t change the
world, but I can help reduce the anxiety in your world by supporting
your Grade 11 and 12 student’s writing whether they are doing ATAR or
completing the International Baccalaureate.
In a perfect world the earlier years of high school would have
equipped your teen with all the knowledge they need to succeed in
Grade 11 and 12 – but this world is far from perfect. And the pressure
to succeed in Grades 11 and 12 can mean all those earlier lessons and
habits evaporate. Working with me on a weekly or twice-weekly basis
gives your senior student a quiet compassionate listener. Someone who
they trust to explain the assessment requirements without judgement of
“silly” questions. A person to guide their efforts and at times to
make them laugh.
All support and learning options are tailored and delivered to meet
the needs of specific students and their identified priorities in
improving their written work. As I learn more about your student, and
their strengths, gaps and aspirations, we implement techniques I
learned and developed in North American and Australian academic
writing. We dive deep to support the needs of each student and each
writing task. Ideally I will have worked with your student before
their senior years, but that’s not always possible, and sometimes
there might be just one task that needs support. Some of the options
to meet those needs are detailed below. If you’re imagining something
different, please contact me so we can discuss ways I can help.
- Emergency Essay Intervention
- Essay Draft Feedback
- External Exam Preparation
- STEM Writing
- Referencing and Formatting
All prices are available after discussing your needs. Please email [email protected] to discuss your specific requirements and receive a quote.
Emergency Essay Intervention
Book an online session for a 45-minute speed-brainstorm of your forthcoming essay. Receive a pdf of our joint “whiteboarded” concept development and get confidence that you know what you want to write before you begin. If you have a draft Introduction, we will review its structure together. This feedback will give you a foundation for writing a successful essay. In addition, you will get a taste of The Writers’ Schoolhouse planning approach and concepts to support your essay’s Introduction and Conclusion.
Essay Draft Feedback
Writing is revising. No one can write a perfect essay in one draft, so
once you are finished brainstorming, have detailed your paper’s
outline, and written a first draft, then it is time to revise. You
need to do your own revision first, but once that’s done you can send
me your draft and receive detailed comments explained to you in a
scheduled meeting online or in person. Another option is to wait for
teacher feedback on your draft – once you’ve done your best to respond
to your teacher’s suggestions I can help you check them off and
clarify anything that did not quite make sense to you.
This is not editing. I do not make edits or write your essay. I offer
detailed recommendations with explanations; the focus is on teaching
you things you’ll need to improve not just this paper but all your
future writing.
You will want to think through the suggestions I offer, so be sure to
schedule review this early enough to allow both for me to provide
comments, and to allow you time to refine your final draft.
External Exam Preparation
Whether you’re going to write about All the Light We Cannot See, Othello, The Dry, Never
Let Me Go, or you’re facing IB Papers 1 and 2, a boot-camp with a
group of your friends and The Writers’ Schoolhouse will help reduce
anxiety and increase success.
Shakespeare one-on-one
Jump over to the Shakespeare in School page to find an option to help you out.
Exam Prep Boot Camp
Intensive boot-camps are designed to aid small groups of students to achieve their writing goals supported by and within a cohort of committed fellow writers. We work together and dive deep with the text you will be analysing in your final External English Exam so you benefit from my knowledge of the text, my insights about what markers look for to decide whether you write well, and suggestions about improving your final mark. Boot-camps include direct teaching and discussion, practice writing tasks, facilitated peer support and feedback, as well as engagement with your Writers’ Schoolhouse writing specialist.
STEM Writing
Being in Science, Engineering, Technology, Medical or Social Science
fields is no excuse for poor writing. In fact, clear communication is
even more important when concepts involved revolve around technical
discipline specificities, and jargon is dense. Yet many STEM students
feel very uncomfortable writing, and the ideas that seem so logical in
concept or theory, end up in an incoherent mess on a page – you need
to be sure your writing is not jumbled, illogical or grammatically
inconsistent.
As a scientist it is likely you know what you want to explain, but how
do you organize your argument? How do you clearly delineate and define
your specific research question? Does your rationale clearly connect
the claim to your research question and support your hypothesis? How
do you focus your ideas and communicate effectively? These Writing for
Research skills are complex, specialised and can be carefully taught
to you at the Writers’ Schoolhouse.
The Writers’ Schoolhouse specialises in support of STEM students
because I am a qualified chemical engineer with two decades experience
working in the corporate STEM environment. I then moved into Social
Sciences and earned an MA from The University of Chicago. In 2019-2020
I worked in the University of Chicago Graham School MA program in
Threat and Emergency Response Management, and the University of
Chicago School of Social Work. You can be confident that I speak your
language and the language of your scientific audience.
Referencing and Formatting
All students at the Writers’ Schoolhouse will be given guidance on
academic formatting and referencing requirements. In addition, all
students have access to resources on formatting and referencing for
academic submissions.
You will find most academic styles described online in great detail,
with examples provided at the
Purdue Owl website. Your school or university likely provides you with access to a
citation manager. Just be sure you are using the correct citation
form specified by your teacher, professor or the journal for
publication. And always double check that the citation manager’s
generated list is accurate.
Another excellent resource is the
Chicago Manual of Style, however you may find you have to use your University login to
access all of the resources.